Please give me feedback on my ebook cover.

[Frchgrl]

I'm working with a graphic artist to get the feel down that I want however what I want and what is appealing to the masses are two different things. I much rather have atomic starburst's, retro shapes and what not. What do you think of his latest? All comments welcome (I think, lol)

http://img.auctiva.com/imgdata/8/0/9/3/7/2/webimg/270758755_o.jpg

[Good Buddy]

I like it, but... Never settle until you love it.

[Mattie]

Too busy!  Too many words, too many colors, too many images.  I'd like to see your retro idea with atomic starbursts. 

[ctumma]

I agree with Mattie. It really doesn't grab my attention, sorry.

[Frchgrl]

He's getting there! Here is a pic based off a sketch I did. I'm having him tweak it a bit more but this is more my style.

http://img.auctiva.com/imgdata/8/0/9/3/7/2/webimg/271623774_o.jpg

Keep in mind the cover is more of a secondary factor as the sales page will have more details. Nonetheless, I still think it matters.

[SplashsMom]

I do like the second look better. First one was too cluttered.
The cover is a VERY big deal. You have 3 seconds to make that first impression.

[nancydr2]

I like the second on way better.  The first one didn't really scream "vintage" like the second does.

[Frchgrl]

Thanks for the feedback. I got another revision today. I think I'm ready to launch with this cover. Let me know what you all think? I value your feedback.

http://img.auctiva.com/imgdata/8/0/9/3/7/2/webimg/272078837_o.jpg

[valleythriftshopper]

The color & design of the revised book is much cuter & eye catching than the original.  I might change the "starring Brigette Martinez" bubble as it doesn't seem relavant to me.  I would say by Brigette Martinez 10 year Ebay member, seller since 1999, etc. or Ebay Powerseller if you have been a power seller.  I think it is important to emphasize your credentials as an Ebay guide. 

[Frchgrl]

Thanks! Well, the idea was that rather then saying "By Brigitte Martinez", the graphic being a "drive in" marquee , I'm the star so to speak. I don't know how technical I want to be as the sales page will have most of the pertinant info. This is, although an important detail, not a major detail.

Hm? Contemplating.